Written in response to the prompt: Friday Writing #224: Just Desserts
Defeated. Haggard. He stayed. Dessert arrived.
Note:
Inspired by the brevity of Ernest Hemingway—where meaning lies beneath what is said—this is a small attempt at a 6-word nano tale.
A man, worn down by life, chooses not to leave.
There is no clear reason to stay—only the quiet act of staying. And then, dessert arrives.
Nice brevity Suman 👏 I don't think you need add the explanation though - let the reader see it beneath in their own way 👍
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